critsplease?

OK, this is my first time critique-ing, so here goes! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

I wouldn't worry about the hair so much for now.

General head shape: is good, I don't think the forehead is too wide, though the jaw line needs to come down a bit more than what it is currently.

Ear: Good amount of detail in here, though this needs to come down the head a bit, the ear tends to line up with the eye & mouth, not the eyebrown and nose.

Eyebrows: Could do with coming down a fraction, and to not overlap onto the nose so much, though this is an easy mistake to make with this pose.

Eyes: Look good, I like the intensity of them! The eye that's further away needs to be slightly smaller to give the drawing a greater sense of depth.

Nose: No complaints here.

Mouth: Again, no complaints, I like how the teeth are just peeking through the open lips.

Neck: this is making the head look like it's jutting out a bit, maybe make the line under the chin a bit more vertical? Though not going straight down!

Hand: I get what you mean about the hand, and I'm struggling to put a finger on why it looks odd, I think the overall size of the hand is a little big, and the first part of each finger that leads on from the knuckles could do with being a bit shorter. I always find hands difficult to draw and usually have to get someone to model for me, even photographs don't work very well!

Overll, it's an excellent effort, the shading stops it from looking 2-dimensional too, keep up the good work!